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Laurie now keeps busy teaching online writing workshops for a global community of writers who attend her classes online through various RWA chapters and through her own site at maintains an active role at Black Velvet Seductions as a member of the company’s acquisitions team and contunues to edit many of the manuscripts the company publishes through her popular Yellow Highlighter Classes.Laurie teaches on a diverse range of topics covering subjects that caused the most rejections during her years as editor-in-chief at Black Velvet Seductions.Read more about Laurie and check out her writing tips at her website at her through the contact button in the upper right corner of the site or by leaving a comment for her on the site.Activate Your Voice: Avoid the Passive Prose These days, with so much competition, you might need more than a clever plot to attract readers.We’ll cover shifting point of view at chapters and scene breaks and the more controversial changes of point of view which happen within scenes.Every time I teach a class on point of view and I mention head hopping someone tells me that Nora Roberts does it.
In this free, 5 day, workshop I will address the legal ways to shift point of view within manuscripts.
Active, energetic prose will bring your scenes and characters to life.
Most important, an individual voice will set you apart from everyone else, and make your books or series attract repeat readers.
With the guidance of Alicia Rasley, a veteran editor and writing teacher, you will learn to identify passive prose—both boring passages and grammatical passive voice (“The ball was hit”)—and revise in more action.
With examples and interactive exercises, you’ll learn to recognize when passive voice is useful, and when it should be replaced with more active sentence constructions.During this free class we’ll cover the various types of point of view shifts – where and how to do them.